I like the second one because the characters have the piece of pie infront of them. It gives their running a purpose. But you could also put the pie infront of them on the top one and keep the title on the bottom (with pie added as a word). the dark letters on white look class.
Wonderful works! I love the botto image, the composition is better than upper imageClaudio Cerri's Sketch Blog
I like the bottom one also man. But I like the pie from the first one. When can we be expecting the book?
Thanks for the input guys, it means a lot. Dan my man I really have no idea, I want to say before CTN but freelance really keeps getting in my way. I'm a perfectionist and I keep tweaking the format. I'm looking at all the sketchbooks I have and trying to pick what I like from each one..In due time my friend. i hope all is well on the eastside.
I think the second one looks more interesting, as all of them are looking forward, where your name is. Sort of guides us to the name. Both looking great, Good luck man,
Initially I might've leaned towards the top one since I like the more simplified font at the center/bottom of the page and away from the center image. But the way these compositions are set up...I think the bottom one makes more sense here. Looking good either way!
Number 2 :D
The second one definitely but i like the first pie better.